Three luxury compositions, then the five worlds they came from.

The top three are the same luxury world composed three ways, pushed harder than the Madison below them. Same real prices and the same two locations throughout, so the only thing changing is the design. Published prices and the Spanish mirror survive whichever you pick. The current site is not here on purpose: its whole idea is a plain patient handout, which is why polishing it cannot get to the reaction you want.

Luxury, the roll's lead pair

The Rail

A fixed left rail holding the name, the nav and both numbers, with full-height photography scrolling against it. Gallery architecture. The most expensive of the three.

Risk: the rail costs real width on a laptop. Open
Luxury, restraint

The Column

One narrow measure down the middle, enormous air, photographs breaking full width between blocks. The dice put this first and I had ranked it last.

Risk: restraint can read as unfinished rather than expensive. Open
Luxury, editorial

The Horizon

A visible horizontal system every element aligns to, with the photographs as full-width letterbox bands between the type. Magazine pacing.

Risk: the rules can read as busy if the rhythm slips. Open
Luxury, first pass

The Madison

Madison Avenue clinic. Cool porcelain and deep jade, no beige and nothing dark, a Didone display, and her own photographs: the practitioner at work, which no rival site shows.

Risk: can price her above her own $299 menu. Open
The roll dealt this one

The Line Diagram

Transit wayfinding. Each area is a line, each of the six sessions a stop, both locations are stations, and the prices are a fare board. Needs no photography at all.

Risk: signage can read cold for a body treatment. Open
My own pick

The Areas Chart

The price list is a drawing of the body. Every area she treats is leadered to its real price in the margin, so pointing at it is the whole interface.

Risk: it is the direction most laser sites already gesture at. Open
Survived judging

The Kiosk Print

Three permitted inks on grey board, one drawn mark per service, printing slightly off register. No photograph anywhere, which is honest about what we actually have.

Risk: can read as a design exercise rather than a business. Open
The beige one, kept for comparison

The Category Standard

What a laser clinic actually ships, built properly rather than as a strawman: serif display, soft shell neutrals, a centred hero. Her prices stay on it, which the real ones hide.

Risk: hard to tell apart from the eleven competitors we measured. Open